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When absent days leave me no sight and strength
Of you, nor touch of your sweet lips on mine
And I cannot hear words of any length
That may comfort bring my heart of hearts’ sighs.

Longing you I rest in blanketed tears
Letting dreams carry me with hopes intoned
Adrift in beautiful memories shared
To the spot we have that is ours alone.

Let’s go there, where passion is resolute
Our words alight, forever drenched sunsets,
Sweet warmth the heavens cannot refute
Nor earthen silence put quickly to rest.

Laurel rose and vines grow stronger entwined
So too do we with hearts and stars aligned.
  
©2005-2009 ~shiftygimli
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this was my first real attempt at a sonnet, written after about a week after she broke up with me. she is going through a rough time and felt that i couldn't help her, she decided it'd be best for both of us to not be together. it is hard when you find someone that you feel could be it and something happens and neither of you can help it but it ends. when i used to read poetry to her she asked if i could write one for her, I have written a few now and this one was in response to a memory of her and me watchin shakespeare in love. well, take a read and write a comment or two.

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